It was a nice Wednesday and my mom told me like always: Rise and shine! I was late for school again. I didn't want to get out of bed, anyway I did it. I could hear my mom again: Shake a leg girl! And I did realize that I was very late for school. I went out of home and then I smelled a rat. A girl on the corner had a weird expression on her face, something was wrong. A guy was selling movies on the street and she was very mad yelling at him. He was a fishy guy I thought. Then the guy said: Go fly a kite! And the girl said: I’m not going to pay through the nose you are totally mad! I was looking at him and he told me: what are you looking? And I was like Gosh! I have to run! But I couldn’t, I was just horsing around the street. The guy was looking at me very mad, and he told me: Cat got your Tongue? Finally he took out his gun, and I was like Oh my gosh I'm going to kite the bucket! I was high and dry because the other girl ran away! I closed my eyes and then my mom told me: rise and shine little girl!
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
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It was a nice Wednesday and my mom told me (like(WW)) always: (Rise(L)) and shine! I was late for school again. I didn't want to get out of bed, anyway I did it. I could hear my mom again: (Shake(L)) a leg girl! And I did realize that I was very late for school. I went out (of()) home and then (I()) smelled a rat. A girl on the corner had a weird expression on her face, something was wrong. A guy was selling movies on the street and she was very mad yelling at him. He was a fishy guy I thought. Then the guy said: (Go(L)) fly a kite! And the girl said: I’m not going to pay through the nose (SM P) you are totally mad! I was looking at him and (SM W)) he told me: what are you looking (SM W))? And I was like Gosh! I have to run! But I couldn’t, I was just horsing around the street. The guy (was looking at me very mad(W.O)), and (SM W) (he()) told me: Cat got your Tongue? Finally he took out his gun, and I was like Oh my gosh I'm going to kite the bucket! I was high and dry because the other girl ran away! I closed my eyes and then my mom told me: rise and shine little girl!
ReplyDeleteI liked your story. I found it creative and funny. You have some mistakes to correct though.
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ReplyDeleteI loved your story. Very creative. I really thought the girl was going to die. Good job. Now, try to complete your words ok?
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PS: I saw that you rewrote the story. Thank you!